Good but repitive
Really good riff but don't you think the riff is repeated a little too much? - The riff is used in the intro, palm muted in the verses, the chorus, the bridge- pretty much every part of the song that riff is in. Bridges in music are supposed to be a break from the original rhythm but it's just the same thing throughout. You could have at least put some kind of a solo over the top of the riff at the bridge section.
Well apart from that, the song is good, I liked the lyrics.
very calm and relaxing song there - flows really well! Good job, and keep up making music!
Flowing in ambient songs is very important so I payed a lot of detail to that, while still trying to maintainoriginal melodies.
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